A good teacher is like a shining star to students. Miss Li, my senior middle school English teacher, is a shining star in my life.  
     When I began my senior middle school years, I had difficulty in learning English. I dared not speak English aloud in public because of my poor pronunciation and intonation.I could not get high marks and grammar was not right at all.Afraid of being lanughed at,I never put up my hand to answer questions in English class.When Miss Li found out my situation,she encouraged me and lent me a hand,which rapidly improved my English.With her help,I became interested in English and eventually got high marks.
      Miss Li,like a shining star,shines in my path of success.

    一颗闪亮的星
    一个好老师对学生来说就像一颗闪亮的星。李老师，我高中时的英语老师，就是我生命中的一颗闪亮的星。
    刚上高中时，我英语学得很吃力。我不敢在公开场合说英语，因为我的语音、语调彳艮糟糕，英语成绩彳艮差，语法一塌糊涂。害怕被嘲笑，所以英语课上我从来不举手回答问题。李老师发现我的情况后，向我伸出了援助之手，并鼓励我。这一切使我很快提高了英语水平。在她的帮助下，我渐渐对英语感兴趣了，成绩也提高了。
    李老师，就像一颗闪亮的星照耀着我前进的道路。