例2

Opportunities come quietly. They go quietly.

修改为：When opportunities come they come quietly and go by without being noticed. (用主从句连接两句)

例3

They are lazy people. They suffer more from serious problems.

修改为： Some people who appear to be lazy are suffering from more serious problems. (用定语从句连接两句)

例4

We live in the same world and share the same lot. We have to cooperate with each other. This is a win-win matter.

修改为：As we live in the same world and share the same lot, we have to cooperate with each other, since this is a win-win matter. (用主从句连接三句)

例5

The rich countries, however, are falling short in meeting the financial promises. These financial promises were made at the Cairo Population Conference in 1994. This left most of the population stabilization cost with the poorer nations.

修改为：

The rich countries, however, are falling short in meeting the financial promises made at the Cairo Population Conference in 1994, leaving most of the population stabilization cost with the poorer nations. (用过去分词和现在分词连接上下句)

(四)使用过渡词语连接上下文

前面已经提到过渡词语可以连接上下文。过渡词语很多，有表示层次递进的，如：first, second, furthermore等；有表示比较和对比的，如：in contrast， similarly，contrary to；有表示结论的，如：in short, in conclusion, in a word等；还有表示转折的，如：

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