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考研英语写作的连贯性原则

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本文《考研英语写作的连贯性原则》关键词:英语考试,考研英语,大学英语 考研试题下载
—1—2,我们也可以这样总结本文的连贯特征:内容上下贯通,句句首尾相连。下面请再完整地看一遍修改后的文章

Sample for reference:

To travel around the country has long been my dream. This dream is much more likely to be realized now than it would have been ten years ago, since I have grown up and have begun to earn my living. For me, an ideal travel experience would begin in Beijing, known as the capital of China, where there are many places of historic interest and scenic beauty.

From Beijing I would cross the north part of the country to Inner Mongolia. In Huhehaote I would explore the grassland, taste milk tea and listen to folk music.

My next stop would be Jiuzhaigou, a place in Sichuan Province, which is very attractive for its undisturbed nature covered with trees, flowers and waterfalls.

Having seen enough nature by this time, I would head east along the Yangtse River to Nanjing and Shanghai, for both cities are considered as a pair of shining pearls on the river.

Continuing south, I would visit Hangzhou, a “paradise” on earth. Here I would go boating and take pictures in the beautiful West Lake.

At this time it would be necessary to count how much money I still have, if a tour of Guangdong Province were still possible, I would stop in Guangzhou and Shenzhen. But by this time my money would run low, there is only one place to end my trip—Tianjin, my hometown.

通过对这篇例文的分析,我们清楚地了解到英语连贯的多种方法。要想掌握这些技巧,还要多写多练。

()内容充实完整是语义连贯的基础

有些作文习作语言欠连贯的原因之一是语言内容不充实。请先看下例:

Teenagers are active to voice their opinions. Parents are afraid that they have no experience. As a result, children feel caged. Parents feel difficult.

由于内容不充实完整,读者就不能完全理解作者的意思,读起来感觉断断续续。请看修改后的段落:

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