作者：邓德权 

　　高考英语大多以客观题为主，仅书面表达和阅卷老师接触最为亲密。阅卷老师喜欢什么样的英语作文，按什么规则给分，这是众多考生最为关注的问题。今天，我就以一个阅卷老师的身份，把这些秘密告诉给你。

　　高考英语书面表达的评分基本原则就是以要点给分，以要点语言错误扣分。所以，抓住要点，减少要点语言错误无疑是高考英语得高分的重要谋略。笔者在2006年四川高考阅卷的过程中，发现书面表达的主要问题集中在：（1）审题不准、漏掉要点。把不该写的如“武侯祠”、“乐山大佛”等写上去了，而漏掉了“交通”、“气候”等要点。（2）句型、时态等基础知识不牢。不少人只能写出一些相应的单词，写不出完整、正确的句子。（3）单词拼写错误多。如考生原文中，把traffic,example,water等常用词写错。为此，下面我们仅以四川卷为例，对考生作文加以点评。并根据评分细则，提出应对措施，希望给你高考应试提供帮助。

　　一、高考原题再现

　　（四川卷）书面表达（满分25分）

　　假如你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Nick将于八月来四川旅游，特来信询问有关旅游景点情况。试根据下面所提供的要点，写一封回信，并表示盼望他的到来。

　　注意：1、词数100左右，信的格式及开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

　　 2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3、参考词汇：省份province;海子lake; 都江堰水利工程Dujiangyan Irrigation Project

　　我们从题目要求可看出该文要点有五个：（1）、许多世界著名的风景名胜；（2）、九寨沟美丽，海子清澈见底，色彩斑斓；（3）、都江堰水利工程有两千多年历史，仍在发挥作用；（4）、气候适宜，交通方便；（5）、盼望到来。

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　　二、考生高考书面表达原文分析：

　　（一）、Now, I’d like to tell you some wonderful seesiqhts in Sichuan. In fact, there are lots of places of interest which are well-known to the world.

　　For example, Jiuzhaigou is such a beautiful place that a great number of people pay a visit to it every year. The lake there is clean enough to see the bottom of it and it is very colorful as well. Besides, the Dujiangyan Irriqation Project also attracts so many visitors with a history of more than 2000 years. It’s still taking up its job.

　　Further more the weather in Sichuan is just Ok and it’s covenient for you to travel too. I’m looking forward to your coming.

　　Best wishes!

　　点评：该文五个要点齐全，语言基本无误，而且还使用了In fact, there are lots of places of interest which are well-known to the world. The lake there is clean enough to see the bottom of it and it is very colorful as well等一些非常出彩的句子。整篇文章连贯、流畅，表达清楚。该作文给分范围22—23分。（注：划横线处为语言错误。）

　　（二）、In your letter you asked me about that the place of the traveling views. I will tell you about it correctly at once. There are many beautiful sights, many of them are great in the world. Including  nine-Zhaigou, the lake is a good place where you should travel in Sicluan provice. The lake is clearly you could see, and the color is very beautiful.

　　On the other hand , the Dujiangyan Irrigation Projeec is great . It has about two thousand history and It also has very importand at once.

　　The weather is very right and the triffice is very easy. You could do it rightly.

　　I am looking forward to your coming.

　　 点评：该文五个要点基本齐全，但语言错误较多（多达10多个），按评分细则，10个左右错误，取

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